{"id":139,"date":"2009-08-28T19:53:00","date_gmt":"2009-08-28T11:53:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/hymike.net\/blog\/?p=139"},"modified":"2009-08-28T19:53:00","modified_gmt":"2009-08-28T11:53:00","slug":"gre_essay_review_review","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.hymike.net\/?p=139","title":{"rendered":"GRE\u4f5c\u6587\u590d\u4e60\u56de\u987e"},"content":{"rendered":"

\u590d\u4e60\u65f6\u95f4\uff1a<\/span>090727-090824<\/span><\/p>\n

\u8003\u8bd5\u65f6\u95f4\uff1a<\/span>090824 15:00<\/span><\/p>\n

\u8003\u8bd5\u5730\u70b9\uff1a\u957f\u6c99\u6c38\u534e<\/span><\/p>\n

\u7b2c\u4e00\u5468\uff1a<\/span><\/p>\n

\u7b2c\u4e00\u5468\u7684\u590d\u4e60\u6bd4\u8f83\u653e\u677e\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u9700\u8981\u62a5\u540d\uff0c\u7136\u540e\u5f04\u5f97\u6574\u5929\u5fc3\u795e\u4e0d\u5b81\u3002\u6700\u540e\u7ec8\u4e8e\u662f\u62a5\u597d\u540d\u4e86\uff0c\u4e0a\u6d77\u5317\u4eac\u90fd\u6ca1\u6709\u7a7a\u4f4d\u4e86\uff0c\u53ea\u80fd\u62a5\u5230\u957f\u6c99\u53bb\u4e86\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u9664\u4e86\u62a5\u540d\uff0c\u7b2c\u4e00\u5468\u4e3b\u8981\u5c31\u662f\u770b<\/span>argu<\/span>\u7684\u9898\u76ee\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u4e4b\u524d\u9898\u76ee\u90fd\u6ca1\u770b\u8fc7\uff0c\u4e00\u70b9\u90fd\u4e0d\u719f\u6089\uff0c\u6839\u672c\u5c5e\u4e8e<\/span>0<\/span>\u57fa\u7840\u7684\u90a3\u79cd\u3002\u770b<\/span>argu242<\/span>\u4e2a\u9898\u770b\u4e86\u4e00\u4e2a\u661f\u671f\uff0c\u5230\u5468\u4e94\uff0c\u4e5f\u5c31\u770b\u770b\u82f1\u6587\uff0c\u518d\u770b\u770b\u4e2d\u6587\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u82f1\u6587\u57fa\u672c\u770b\u4e0d\u8fdb\u53bb\u2026\u2026\u5468\u516d\u7684\u65f6\u5019\u7b2c\u4e00\u6b21\u53bb\u4e86\u95f5\u884c\u533a\u56fe\u4e66\u9986\uff0c\u5f00\u59cb\u770b<\/span>issue<\/span>\u7684\u9898\u76ee\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u6bd4\u8f83\u77ed\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u4e24\u5929\u770b\u5b8c\u4e86\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u7b2c\u4e8c\u5468\uff1a<\/span><\/p>\n

\u7b2c\u4e8c\u5468\u8fd8\u662f\u770b\u4f5c\u6587\uff0c\u770b<\/span>argu<\/span>\uff0c\u5199\u63d0\u7eb2\u3002\u56e0\u4e3a\u9700\u8981\u52a8\u7b14\u5199\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u65f6\u95f4\u82b1\u5f97\u6bd4\u8f83\u957f\uff0c\u518d\u52a0\u4e0a\u770b\u4e86\u5f88\u591a\u7684\u52a8\u753b\u548c\u7535\u5f71\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u57fa\u672c\u4e0a\u6ca1\u6709\u8fdb\u6b65\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u7b2c\u4e09\u5468\uff1a<\/span><\/p>\n

\u518d\u4e0d\u5199\u4f5c\u6587\u5c31\u6765\u4e0d\u53ca\u4e86\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u53ea\u80fd\u786c\u7740\u5934\u76ae\u5199\uff0c\u5468\u4e00\u5199\u4e86<\/span>issue208<\/span>\uff08\u8003\u8bd5\u5c31\u5199\u7684\u8fd9\u4e2a\uff09\uff0c\u4e4b\u540e\u5468\u4e94\u5199\u4e86<\/span>issue103<\/span>\uff08\u8003\u8bd5\u62bd\u5230\u8fd9\u4e2a\uff09\uff0c\u53ea\u80fd\u611f\u6168\u8001\u5929\u5bf9\u6211\u771f\u597d\uff0c\u53ea\u662f\u6211\u6ca1\u6709\u628a\u63e1\u3002<\/span>Argu<\/span>\u8fd9\u4e2a\u661f\u671f\u4e5f\u5199\u4e86\u4e24\u7bc7\uff0c\u4e0d\u8fc7\u7528\u8bcd\u76f8\u5f53\u8d2b\u4e4f\uff08\u8003\u8bd5\u7684\u65f6\u5019\u8fd8\u662f\u8d2b\u4e4f\uff09\uff0c\u771f\u53ef\u60b2\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u9664\u4e86\u5199\u4f5c\u6587\uff0c\u8fd9\u661f\u671f\u5f00\u59cb\u770b<\/span>issue<\/span>\u7684\u63d0\u7eb2\u4e86\uff0c\u4f3c\u4e4e\u4e5f\u662f\u5f88\u591a\u7684\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u7b2c\u56db\u5468\uff1a<\/span><\/p>\n

\u6700\u540e\u4e00\u5468\u4e86\uff0c\u4e5f\u662f\u6bd4\u4e4b\u524d\u4e09\u5468\u52a0\u5728\u4e00\u8d77\u8fd8\u52aa\u529b\u7684\u4e00\u5468\uff08\u867d\u7136\u8fd8\u662f\u6ca1\u5230\u4e00\u5929<\/span>9<\/span>\u5c0f\u65f6\u7684\u5730\u6b65\uff09\uff0c\u5177\u4f53\u8fc7\u7a0b\uff1a<\/span><\/p>\n

\u4f2a\u671f\u672b\u5468<\/span>\u2014\u2014Ultimately, I’m on my way.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u6700\u540e\u4e00\u5468\u4e86\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u5e0c\u671b\u8fd9\u4e00\u5468\u8fc7\u5f97\u50cf\u671f\u672b\u8003\u8bd5\u5468\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u7f8e\u5176\u540d\u66f0\uff1a\u4f2a\u671f\u672b\u8003\u8bd5\u5468\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u6301\u7eed\u66f4\u65b0\u4e00\u5468\u5230\u5468\u516d\uff08\u5468\u65e5\u665a\u4e0a\u4e0d\u5728\u5bb6\u4e86<\/span>\u2026\u2026<\/span>\uff09<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u7b2c\u4e00\u5929\uff08<\/span>8.17<\/span>\uff09\uff1a<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a\u4e70\u4e86\u52a8\u611f\u65b0\u52bf\u529b\uff08<\/span>orz<\/span>\u65e0\u5173\uff09\uff0c\u6574\u7406<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2<\/span>61-126<\/span>\uff08\u6574\u7406\u5230<\/span>126<\/span>\u5c31\u6ca1\u5fc3\u601d\u7ee7\u7eed\u4e86\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u4e0a\u6d77\u5b66\u53f7\u5230\u5934\u4e86\uff0c\u8bdd\u8bf4<\/span>125<\/span>\u8fd8\u542c\u96be\u7684\uff09\uff0c\u5199\u4e86\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>argu<\/span>\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>issue<\/span>\uff08\u968f\u673a\u7684\uff09\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u539f\u672c\u8ba1\u5212\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\u6574\u7406\u5b8c\uff08<\/span>61-244<\/span>\uff09\uff0c\u663e\u7136\u662f\u51e0\u4e4e\u4e0d\u53ef\u80fd\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u9274\u4e8e\u6b64\uff0c\u4eca\u5929\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\u7b97\u5b8c\u6210\u4e86<\/span>75%<\/span>\u3002\u660e\u5929\u7ee7\u7eed\uff01<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u7b2c\u4e8c\u5929\uff08<\/span>8.18<\/span>\uff09\uff1a<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a\u770b\u4e86<\/span>cross game<\/span>\u52a8\u753b\u548c\u6f2b\u753b\uff08<\/span>orz<\/span>\u4f9d\u65e7\u65e0\u5173\uff0c\u800c\u4e14\u8fd8\u662f\u7f16\u5916\u7684\uff09\uff0c\u6574\u7406<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff08\u53d8\u6210\u4e86\u770b\u63d0\u7eb2\u4e86\uff0c\u6574\u7406\u6ca1\u6548\u679c\uff09<\/span>127-200<\/span>\uff0c\u5199\u4e86\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>argu<\/span>\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>issue<\/span>\uff08\u968f\u673a\uff09\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u539f\u672c\u7684\u8ba1\u5212\uff1a\u6574\u7406\u5b8c<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff0c\u5199\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>issue<\/span>\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>argu<\/span>\uff0c\u7406\u8bba\u4e0a\u53ef\u80fd\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u5ea6<\/span>80%<\/span>\u3002\u660e\u5929\u7ee7\u7eed\uff01<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u7b2c\u4e09\u5929\uff08<\/span>8.19<\/span>\uff09\uff1a<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a\u6574\u7406<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff08\u770b\uff0c\u4ece<\/span>201-244+1-30<\/span>\uff09\uff0c\u5199\u4e86\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>issue50<\/span>\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>argu170<\/span>\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u539f\u672c\u7684\u8ba1\u5212\uff1a\u6574\u7406<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff0c\u5199<\/span>issue<\/span>\uff0c<\/span>argu<\/span>\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u5ea6<\/span>70%<\/span>\uff0c\u4eca\u5929\u6ca1\u6709\u524d\u4e24\u5929\u5356\u529b\u4e86\u3002\u52a0\u6cb9\uff01<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u7b2c\u56db\u5929\uff08<\/span>8.20<\/span>\uff09\uff1a<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\u6ca1\u770b\uff0c\u770b\u4e86<\/span>40<\/span>\u4e2a<\/span>argu<\/span>\uff0c\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>issue<\/span>\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>argu<\/span>\uff0c\u80cc\u4e86\u4e00\u70b9<\/span>argu<\/span>\u6a21\u677f\uff0c\u4f3c\u4e4e\u5168\u5fd8\u4e86\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u539f\u672c\u8ba1\u5212\u6ca1\u6709\u3002\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u5ea6\uff1a<\/span>60%<\/span>\uff08\u56e0\u4e3a\u4eca\u5929\u6ca1\u6628\u5929\u8ba4\u771f\uff09<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u53e6\uff1a\u516d\u7ea7\u51fa\u5206\u4e86\uff0c\u6211\u4e00\u4e2a\u5b66\u671f\u6ca1\u78b0\u82f1\u8bed\uff0c\u7ed3\u679c\u6bd4\u4e0a\u6b21\u8fd8\u9ad8\u4e86\u4e00\u70b9\uff08\u4e0a\u6b21<\/span>534<\/span>\u8fd9\u6b21<\/span>553<\/span>\uff09\uff0c\u5176\u4e2d\u542c\u529b\uff1a<\/span>190<\/span>\u9605\u8bfb\uff1a<\/span>241<\/span>\u7efc\u5408\uff1a<\/span>49<\/span>\u5199\u4f5c\uff1a<\/span>73<\/span>\uff0c\u9664\u4e86\u9605\u8bfb\uff08\u6211\u9605\u8bfb\u5411\u6765\u6700\u597d\uff0c\u76f8\u5bf9\u800c\u8a00\uff09\uff0c\u5176\u4ed6\u90fd\u5f88\u4f4e\u3002\u3002\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u7b2c\u4e94\u5929\uff08<\/span>8.21<\/span>\uff09\uff1a<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a<\/span>argu<\/span>\u770b\u5b8c\uff0c<\/span>issue argu<\/span>\u5404\u4e00\u7bc7\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u5ea6\uff1a<\/span>110%<\/span>\u3002\u5c45\u7136\u628a<\/span>argu<\/span>\u770b\u5b8c\u4e86\u3002\u3002\u3002\u867d\u7136\u770b\u5f97\u5f88\u5feb\u5f88\u5feb\uff0c\u4f46\u4e5f\u8d85\u4e4e\u60f3\u8c61\u4e86\u3002\u4e4b\u540e\u8865\u5b8c<\/span>issue<\/span>\uff0c\u8003\u8bd5\u53bb\uff01<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u7b2c\u516d\u5929\uff08<\/span>8.22<\/span>\uff09\uff1a<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u8003\u524d\u6700\u540e\u5728\u5bb6\u7684\u665a\u4e0a\u4e86\u3002<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u5b8c\u6210\u7684\u4efb\u52a1\uff1a\u770b\u5b8c<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff0c\u5199\u4e86\u4e24\u7bc7<\/span>argu<\/span>\u4e00\u7bc7<\/span>issue<\/span>\uff0c\u4fee\u6539\u4e4b\u524d\u7684\u4f5c\u6587\uff08\u5176\u5b9e\u53ea\u662f\u6539\u9519\u522b\u5b57\u3002\u3002\u3002\uff09<\/span>
\n<\/span>\u4eca\u5929\u5bb6\u91cc\u796d\u62dc\u7237\u7237\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u6bd4\u8f83\u70ed\u95f9\uff0c\u6ca1\u6709\u590d\u4e60\u592a\u591a\u7684\u65f6\u95f4\u3002\u540e\u5929\u8003\u8bd5\uff0c\u4e89\u53d6\u80fd\u591f\u5230<\/span>4.5<\/span>\u5427\uff0c<\/span>4<\/span>\u5206\u53ef\u4ee5\u63a5\u53d7\uff08\u7edd\u5bf9\u6b63\u5e38\u6c34\u5e73\u662f<\/span>4<\/span>\u5206\uff09\uff0c<\/span>5<\/span>\u5206\u5c31\u8d85\u8d85\u6c34\u5e73\u53d1\u6325\u4e86<\/span>~
\n<\/span>\u6700\u540e\u7684\u665a\u4e0a\uff0c\u597d\u597d\u4eab\u53d7\u5427\uff0c\u66f4\u65b0\u5b8c\u6bd5\uff01<\/span>
\n\u2014\u2014Ultimately, I’m on my way.<\/span><\/p>\n

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\u4e4b\u540e\u5468\u65e5\u4e0a\u5348\u770b\u770b\u6c64\u5706\u548c\u5b9d\u5b9d\u7684\u4f5c\u6587\uff0c\u4e0b\u5348<\/span>D109<\/span>\u53bb\u957f\u6c99\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u56e0\u4e3a\u5728\u706b\u8f66\u4e0a\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u6211\u5927\u62b5\u662f\u4e0d\u4f1a\u6709\u5fc3\u601d\u770b\u4f5c\u6587\u7684\uff0c\u53ea\u662f\u770b\u4e86\u4e00\u70b9\u70b9\u9ad8\u9891\u7684\u63d0\u7eb2\uff08\u5176\u5b9e\u53ea\u8981\u770b\u524d\u5341\u5c31\u884c\u4e86\uff0c\u8c01\u77e5\u9053\u5462\uff1f\uff09\u4e4b\u540e<\/span>23<\/span>\uff1a<\/span>30<\/span>\u5230\u957f\u6c99\uff0c\u4e70\u706b\u8f66\u7968\uff0c\u53bb\u5bbe\u9986\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u770b\u4e86<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff0c<\/span>1<\/span>\u70b9\u7761<\/span>7<\/span>\u70b9\u8d77\uff0c\u53c8\u770b\u4e86\u4e00\u904d<\/span>issue<\/span>\u63d0\u7eb2\uff0c\u6d17\u4e2a\u6fa1\uff0c\u770b<\/span>argu<\/span>\u9ad8\u9891\u7684\u9898\u76ee\uff0c\u4e4b\u540e\u53bb\u5403\u5348\u996d\uff0c\u5bf9\u9762\u7684\u84b8\u6709\u5473\uff0c\u8fd8\u53ef\u4ee5\uff0c\u5f85\u5230<\/span>2<\/span>\u70b9<\/span>10<\/span>\u5206\uff0c\u51fa\u95e8\u3002\u53bb\u6c38\u534e\uff08\u5c31\u5728\u8fb9\u4e0a\uff09\uff0c\u8003\u8bd5\u3002\u6211\u4e0d\u662f\u7b2c\u4e00\u4e2a\u5230\u7684\uff0c\u6709\u4e00\u4e2a\u6e05\u534e\u7684<\/span>mm<\/span>\uff0c\u597d\u65e9\u554a\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

\u8003\u8bd5\uff0c\u6211\u5f00\u59cb\u6bd4\u8f83\u7d27\u5f20\uff0c\u505a\u95ee\u5377\u90fd\u5f88\u6162\uff0c\u6700\u540e\u5fc3\u4e00\u6a2a\uff0c\u62bd<\/span>issue<\/span>\uff0c\u50bb\u773c\u4e86\uff0c\u5c31\u662f<\/span>208<\/span>\u548c<\/span>103<\/span>\uff0c\u6211\u6700\u521d\u7684\u4e24\u7bc7\uff0c\u5929\uff01\u4e0d\u8fc7\u56e0\u4e3a\u6ca1\u6539\u8fc7\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u5199\u4e0d\u597d\u3002<\/span><\/p>\n

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